Sunday, April 24, 2011

Senior Year - Spring Critiques

Critique 1 - Hero Model Critique - 1/24/2011

No dumpmovie. This was a Hero Model Critique. Here are the process images from that Critique.

Critique Notes:


Critique 2 - Final Spring Critique - 3/18/2011



Critique Notes:
eye  darts
sliding feet
photo is too real
key light on main character?
pause on woodland character
butterflies flight pattern
tower room widows, metal shaders, better lighting
tower stair/walls need better texture
moonlight in room isn't believable
add an artificial light source
fantasy trees - some are great, some are low res and flatly lit
are green trees too shiny?
fountain water needs work
fantasy shot 1 bg needs a better composition
moms face?  better lighting?

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